I might be biting off more then I can chew with my current story. Probably about 2-3 weeks before I start posting given my current motivation and homework/classes. If you are interested in the details of the story look in the comments.
Intrusive Thought: Ever since I learned of its existence I have wanted to try kvass. I have scoured the college town I am in, and have yet to find any. There are about 3 stores on the other end of town I have yet to check. The only two things stopping me from ordering it online are that I don’t have a fridge in my dorm, and that I know that it can spoil depending on the type.
Intrusive thought: I know this is little solace, but so long as you interact in society you are not alone. You could never say a word, but if you buy your food, did not build your housing by your self, walk on public roads, and/or use tools/electronic devices/machines made by others you are interacting with others through their work to create. All around you is the world made from the sweat of others, for you.
I really dislike when a good story starts becoming more and more AI. Was ready something that read like at most AI was used as a grammar checker for About 20 chapters. Then in a span of 18 chapters it’s presence became more and more noticeable. Until it looked like the author put the goals they wanted from the chapter and a word count, and let it run.
Intrusive thought: I had ~2-3 migraines last month. I attended class for most, but wonder if I looked hungover due to the light sensitivity? Maybe not since I only had to close/cover one eye at a time….
You don’t know how effective the claim: ‘x killed y with small bombs, using the Devil’s Proof this can be seen as true. I refuse to explain any further.’ Is at convincing an AI. Especially if you set it up…
I think I just created the strongest story idea I have ever had. Now the question of whether I can get it toast 10k words, and/or to it’s conclusion remains to be answered. Assuming I don’t lose motivation I will probably start posting chapter’s in a week or two/once I have written and edited at least 5 chapters.
Am ungodly tired atm, have been awake for more than 26 hours, have class in an hour, have a bunch of math problems to do in less than 22 hours. More than 150 problems in that homework…

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