You feedback thread started rather slow, but you've come so far! I feel so proud for you. I am sure, newbie writers are in great hands. Keep roasting em!
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Life is not daijobu
I did nothing writing wise today, and it's probably for good. I read 10+ manga/webtoons, played some horse gacha and laid in bed for a long time. Tomorrow is hard work, and I don't have regrets.
Posted a short story:
Tempo’s Bizarre Tales Of Randomness - How To Defeat A System | Scribble Hub
www.scribblehub.com
HARIKITTE IKOU
I finally got WiFi in my house. Now I can procrastinate after work ten times faster
Tomorrow I'll sit writing on the shitty laptop. Small writing projects piled up and now I'll need to sort them and finish them out. Good night.
Uploaded a short story.
Are you still overworked ? Get rest
Posted a "opening chapter" of undeveloped story because I didn't had posted on that collection for a while.
If you want, if you'd like, would you like, do you want, want to know, do you want me, and other flavors of manipulating BS from the LLMs. Those are so hardcoded that I couldn't remove that after 20 minutes of tinkering with it. As if I want to do it, ya stupid clanker.
Tempo, can I pm you my first chapter or two and ask if it reads like I used Butler or not? I did use google doc editor and PWA as a thesaurus and to spot typos and mistakes I could've missed, but I didn't use anything to rewrite even a single sentence. So I'm interested if my broken English looks like AI-assisted slop or not.
Wrote what I thought about symbolism:
Symbolism and motif questions for everyone.
“Worlds aren’t found; they’re made.” If I had to choose a suitably pretentious quote to summarize this symbolism thingy, that would be it. Before language existed as we know it today, mutual pattern-matching with symbols was the go-to for Grug and Ug. Grug could point at a club, say...forum.scribblehub.com
I just looked at your roast and I want the hard truth before I continue going forward with wtv my story is. Ima new writer and I’ve been trying to put tg a story based on a concept I like. I do use Grammarly and dabble in ChatGPT to fix up my grammar and make sure my characters interactions are as natural as possible or seem like.
A New Life
[TW: Mentions of suicide] Amara ended her life, broken by the weight of trauma she was never meant to carry. But instead of peace, she wakes up in a new world—reborn as a baby named Aerea in a medieval omegaverse society. For a while, things seem calm. Her new...
If you want a sleeping aid that LLM had made from my ideas, click this link:
A Systems Thinking Approach to Storytelling in Web Novels.pdf
drive.google.com
Sleep quality is guaranteed! Good night.
Wrote what I thought about pacing:
Pacing questions for everyone.
Pacing in storytelling is defined as "the speed or tempo at which a story unfolds". As readers, we all can see when the story stalls or goes too fast according to our guts. But, as writers, we can't seemingly find out why reader A said it was "glacial" and reader B says it's"perfectly paced"...
Plot questions for everyone.
I really love stories that focus on the characters.
Wrote what I thought about "character-driven" anf "plot-driven" stories. I'm exhausted. -
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