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Prince_Azmiran_Myrian
Prince_Azmiran_Myrian
Just write them as logical and reasonable.
StoneInky
StoneInky
Nah. I think what you mean instead of 'logical', is not describe emotions in any detail. At all.
The emotions are still there, fueling the actions, but don't mention them, or any subtle details. Again, keep it short. Instead, add more and more cussing as the emotions grow, and turn the actions unreasonable.

It's an art. I think I have it down.
StoneInky
StoneInky
Organized:

Female protagonist: Focus on subtle details, long prose, mention and ponder emotions, slow pacing, less cussing
Male protagonist: Focus on rough actions, short sentences, no mentioning emotions, quick pacing, lots of cussing
Prince_Azmiran_Myrian
Prince_Azmiran_Myrian
Well yes, get to the point. Women like to yap.
Problem and solution focused.
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