Really? Also, there is another frequent Naruto fanfic in the Trending (Mob in Naruto World), yet you would not attack that one for being based on Naruto?
Why?
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Just dropping this here. It's clearly indicated at the page of Si Vis Pacem Para Bellum.
A lot sailed past me like the Naruto sex beast system, and the admittedly higher quality mob something. Crusader against flurries encaptured the masses.
You know, I was trying to think about how I don’t weave in information organically But, I’m having a hard time imagining how adding pieces of information chapter by chapter when it’s needed is not organic ? I even made a prologue now.
Don't be wrong, you are doing a fantastic job most of the time, and your information is spread organically. Sometimes, your efforts just fall flat, but it is criticism on a high level admittedly.