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I just scrolled through all the chaps... And yes... You need to do the paragraph spacing right. You only edited two or three chapters maybe.

It's so unreadable that I didn't even bother trying to read.

Work on that first. Then promote your story once again.

Also... Work on the title. Add number to all of them. Like you did with first few chaps.

Thanks a lott for the advice. I was new to scribble hub(It's my mistake I didn't preview the chapters). I just copy pasted them. I just fixed them and numbered the chapters.

If you are willing to, please give it one more try. You can openly rate it 1star if you find any inconsistencies or mistakes. Once again thank you.

Also about the title I am sorry but I can't kinda change it because of the story itself.

The names are sometimes all typed in small letters. Punctuation is a BIG issue as well....
And... Is English your native language?

Add more tags/genres as well.

And when you mention your story... Link the story to its name. Like this [7 ENTITIES]

English is not my native language. I will look into the punctuation and genres as well. Is the story tagged by link option??