tldr : its a melting pot of multiple things, but they dont mix well. Its like frankenstein where you totally see its a unnatural fusion. Or a pot of a soup with thrown ingredients in.
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Tsuru
What i recommend is first :
-what is your goal ?
I thought : did elijah meant to do a relaxing song (sky theme and pic) ?
But then 5s in and you get this DWANG DWANG piano sounds.
-what is your goal ?
I thought : did elijah meant to do a relaxing song (sky theme and pic) ?
But then 5s in and you get this DWANG DWANG piano sounds.
Tsuru
-Like a producer or mixer (whatever name was for this job, i forgot) said
a song, is basically ONE PRINCIPAL PROTAGONIST and rest is to "support it/green leaf it". Like a story.
-and/or i remember the trope, where a singing group is criticized and MC say : you guys keep trying to fight to become the protagonist and why its bad.
Its kinda same thing. I have no clue what to listen to.
a song, is basically ONE PRINCIPAL PROTAGONIST and rest is to "support it/green leaf it". Like a story.
-and/or i remember the trope, where a singing group is criticized and MC say : you guys keep trying to fight to become the protagonist and why its bad.
Its kinda same thing. I have no clue what to listen to.
ElijahRyne
The guitar is supposed to be the lead/primary voice, however I can see your point. Do you mean the low piano voice for the “dwang part”? How are you listening to it? Personally I float between the layers after the first loop. Also did you see/hear yesterday's one?
Tsuru
LASTLY.
VERY IMPORTANT.
The smooth sound of the piano. (the one in background)
IS PERFECT.
Chef kiss lvl.
VERY IMPORTANT.
The smooth sound of the piano. (the one in background)
IS PERFECT.
Chef kiss lvl.
ElijahRyne
The reason for the low piano voice being so jarring is one to serve as a repetitive pattern for your ears to catch on to and as a volume texture, so that the layer does not feel flat despite only repeating one thing.
Tsuru
Its very amateurish. Like a singer/kid that sing very closely to the microphone. = not sure if fault of the micro or kid not knowing how to use one.
Hm.....I think you need to focus more on working on your "editing skills" or your microphone.
Its very amateurish. Like a singer/kid that sing very closely to the microphone. = not sure if fault of the micro or kid not knowing how to use one.
The "dwang part" is very jarring.
Its like a kid hitting the keys.
And the guitar sounds is badly mixed (mixage/edited meaning) with the rest. (its too loud compared to rest)