Urg...... 5/20 The "dwang part" is very jarring. Its like a kid hitting the keys. And the guitar sounds is badly mixed (mixage/edited meaning) with the rest. (its too loud compared to rest)
tldr : its a melting pot of multiple things, but they dont mix well. Its like frankenstein where you totally see its a unnatural fusion. Or a pot of a soup with thrown ingredients in.
What i recommend is first : -what is your goal ? I thought : did elijah meant to do a relaxing song (sky theme and pic) ? But then 5s in and you get this DWANG DWANG piano sounds.
The "dwang part" is very jarring.
Its like a kid hitting the keys.
And the guitar sounds is badly mixed (mixage/edited meaning) with the rest. (its too loud compared to rest)