I wouldn't mind reading your stuff and give you feedback.

Th3Breadnought

Th3Breadnought

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If you're able to get around to it;

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The Gestalt Archives I – Summer 2031

Inspired by the Persona Series, Supernatural, & SCP. Hell has begun bubbling through the cracks of a declining 2031 America. Landen Rye sees the ghosts invisible to others— the unfulfilled dead who mirror his own gnawing emptiness. While politicians promise to manage crises and the self-assured...
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I'm pretty up against the algorithm, lol
 
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Frankey said:
Yo, I gave it a look and checked it out, nice zombie story
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Thank you! Just woke up when I read your feedback and it got me thinking real hard lol. I've only been getting back to writing and it's tough transitioning from someone who usually only does flash/short fiction to a full-on multi-chaptered piece. I realized I gotta slow down lol. Thanks again, it means a lot!
 
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Frankey said:
Hello, I am Frankey, a waste of space and a local nuisance.

I want to start by saying that I am terrible at giving advice, but I wouldn't mind reading your chapter and letting you know if I notice anything wrong.

My credentials are that I have two eyes and I write stories, and they can be good or bad, but you can read them yourself and tell yourself, "Is this dude a better writer than me?" Well, let me tell you, boss, probably not, but you can check for yourself.
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Well, you are welcome to read my book! I am new here, so some comments would be good.
Here is the link : https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2319536/queenmaster-rising/
 
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Frankey said:
Hello, I am Frankey, a waste of space and a local nuisance.

I want to start by saying that I am terrible at giving advice, but I wouldn't mind reading your chapter and letting you know if I notice anything wrong.

My credentials are that I have two eyes and I write stories, and they can be good or bad, but you can read them yourself and tell yourself, "Is this dude a better writer than me?" Well, let me tell you, boss, probably not, but you can check for yourself.
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Hey, there!

I have two Webnovels you might like

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The Maverick and The Succubus [LitRPG]

5 Systems. 5 Royal Families. Greetings, Champion! 17 year-old, Collin Rex is a football player with a heart of gold. But his easygoing life is flipped upside-down when his older siblings fall into a mysterious coma. With no more tricks in their playbook Collin's folks decide to move back to...
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Hacking The System: KINGDOM OF STONE [LitRPG]

'Freedom. Peace. Hope.' It's 1979 and society has advanced thanks to the urban dungeons that sprouted throughout the world. Inside these mazes are magical artifacts and treasures guarded by mythical monsters. To collect these spoils of war Guilds were established by the Government. 23...
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Adventures of Arcade Girl

In the World of Awakened Superheroes, follow the adventures of Ronnie, who awakens the strangest, but most rare superpower of them all, the ability use the weapons, characters and power up's from any game she's played, what's so good about this power you asked, she's a hardcore gamer who curses...
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Read mine....if you dare...
 
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