And I'm not sure what you're trying to achieve with this but when did I ask for feedback?
Hmmmmmmm, in that case, I'm not sure what
you are trying to achieve.
I honestly summoned
@Eldoria because I was unsure of what to make of your post, but still doesn't feel like a fit for the general chat.
Anywhoms, what I said is exactly what I meant: Most of the people here aren't even reading that much and almost all of us have stories. If we could even "help" making something "blow up", we'd constantly do so, but that's just not how it is. I gave you a reality check.
And your story doesn't even have a synopsis. Your cover, though also no proper cover, still tells me more about your story than your "Synopsis" β which is a copyright claim β and the title of the story together, mainly because it gives a hint on the fact that it's about something-something in space.
From what I remember, there were five chapters, out of which three were fat litter (stuff that can be cut out entirely). One "chapter" was a literal play list. Only two(?) were actual story. I don't know if many people on this forum will like that. I didn't. Especially since the story itself could have been the best in the world, but the bold style throughout the entire chapter, coupled with the whole body of text aligned in the center, made it annoying for me to read, so I didn't.
You may not explicitly ask for feedback. But you
are asking for "us" β the Cthulhu-esque entity that is the SH Forum β to "make" your story big. I'm aware this is likely a joke, but you did try to promote your work, no? But you're promoting it to us. I'm part of that and it didn't work for me. It also didn't seem to work for
@NotProudofmySmut, but I could be wrong with that assumption. However, even if we could just magic novels up into the recommended list on the front page, it would require a lot of people here to love your novel. I don't really see that coming to fruition with your fiction in its current state of existence, but that's just my two cents on the matter.
Well, as I said, with that in mind... Good Luck in your ventures.
Have a cookie for trying.
). I recently released my series called "Fateful Events" and would love for all of you to spread it like wildfire 
like I worked really hard on it and stuff 
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