I hope you read my novel *The Exodia Saga* and provide any feedback for improvement.

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The Exodia Saga

Aeon Darkis reclaims the missing fragment of his soul that once lived on the planet Earth. He glimpses a vision of the future—both of this world and of himself—revealing a bleak destiny that ends in an unknown, mysterious death. Aeon watches as he breaks his own limits time...
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i glanced at it. If nothing else, I like seeing large paragraphs. Second new work asking for people here to take a look, that proudly displayed that in the opening chapter. Good god, maybe a trend is starting to reverse itself. I'm going to go back and give it a like just on that merit.

pooh. went instantly to single sentence paragraphs on the next chapter.
well, my "like" went to the introductory paragraph that had the format I enjoy best.
 
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TinaMigarlo said:
i glanced at it. If nothing else, I like seeing large paragraphs. Second new work asking for people here to take a look, that proudly displayed that in the opening chapter. Good god, maybe a trend is starting to reverse itself. I'm going to go back and give it a like just on that merit.

pooh. went instantly to single sentence paragraphs on the next chapter.
well, my "like" went to the introductory paragraph that had the format I enjoy best.
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I try to balance the two, sometimes making it a little longer and sometimes shorter, so that the reader doesn't get bored with the narrative, especially if there are few interactions between characters in the chapter.
 
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