Got my first one star reviews kinda hurts.

Robert.Hillmyre said:

Valid point. It more fantasy with some smut in it than smut with story. Their are chapters were I go full smut. Not just every chapter. Also for context. The whole chapter is an homage to the movie 9 and half weeks. Old movie. They are having sex to charge up crystals to open a portal. Also the place of Ash is if "the thing " and the devil were a place and not an entity. So do smut ppl want full graphic details or something? Balls to the wall all the time?

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Wamba2K said:

I don't know about 'smut people' But I personally prefer more than vagueness. There's a nice space between vague and balls to the wall that I like. The Goldilocks zone of smut, if you will. Also it isn't just the smut. From what I've read, most of the stories read in this vague beat around the bush language. The characters have very little personality and sound exactly the same. It's all very sparse.

I mean the concept sounds interesting, I'd just like to have material to read instead of just a series of simple one line paragraphs.

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A-Random-Writer said:

Ignore it and continue. They're probably mad because they can't write as well as you.


















You got this!

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