The most important part of a web novel is the first chapter. It makes sense, really. On a place like scribblehub, where readers have millions of stories to choose from, it can be considered a privilige to even have them read your first chapter. This first chapter is usually where the reader decides whether they'll commit to the rest of the story or not. (I'd argue its the first few sentences even.) Some of you guys may be able to relate; but any time i try to write a story, the first chapter is always where i struggle the most.
After returning to writing (and scribblehub in general) after almost 3 years, i was thinking it'd be nice to get to know my fellow scribblehub authors a bit better. And what better way to do that than by reading you guys' stories? Now, I'll only be reading the first chapter (unless I'm super into the story), but hey, we've already established how important that first chapter is.
I get quite busy, don't blame me...
What qualifies me to give you feedback? Absolutely nothing... Instead of looking at it as 'professional feedback', just think of it as a friends opinion of your stories :)
Fun bonus: Tell me what inspired you to write the story your working on! For me it was the Japan trip I just came back from with my best friend. I couldn't stop thinking about all the amazing things we did there, the wonderful people we met, the anxiety we had when we had to find our way through Shinjuku train station for the first time. My best friend and I keep talking about how it felt like a movie, so that's what inspired me to write my current story, i wanted to recapture how wonderful it can be to just get lost and adventure with someone you care about
edit: pls no smut ;_;
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