? New Fantasy Novel – I Will Never Let Her Suffer Again

Luqu · Jan 25, 2026

Title: I will never let her suffer again
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Hi everyone ?
I recently started publishing my fantasy-action novel on Scribble Hub and wanted to share it here.
The story follows Meer, a boy who awakens power through pain, blood, and a promise he refuses to break.
It focuses on:
Emotional motivation (protecting someone precious)
Action + magic (aura, elements, combat)
Father–son bond
Slow-burn growth and awakening
I’d really appreciate any feedback, thoughts, or criticism from fellow writers and readers ?
If you enjoy emotional fantasy with action, I hope you’ll give it a try.

“I will never let her suffer again”

Meer dies in his original world and wakes up in the body of a boy from a fantasy empire—inside a story he once loved. He knows what will happen. He knows who will suffer. And this time… he refuses to let it happen. Armed with future knowledge, a strange...

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Thank you for your time
-- Luqu

Alski · Jan 25, 2026

Luqu said:
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??Hello buttler, my old friend
I've come to talk with you again ??

L1aei · Jan 25, 2026

Luqu said:
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Your missed a spot cleaning up after your LLM.

FRWriter · Jan 25, 2026

Luqu said:
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I can already guess what kind of story it is.

CharlesEBrown · Jan 25, 2026

FRWriter said:
I can already guess what kind of story it is.

Blandly competent, emphasis on "bland"?

Zexusgo · Jan 25, 2026

that was funny

Luqu · Jan 26, 2026

FRWriter said:
I can already guess what kind of story it is.

Yes I don't know write perfectly because I am sacred if I write something bad u all make fun me. So I took ai help also yeah I asked help ai to see my mistakes if I did something wrong. But guys please at least read story after complain it to me I will listen. I got the different idea so I made it

Alski · Jan 26, 2026

Luqu said:
Yes I don't know write perfectly because I am sacred if I write something bad u all make fun me. So I took ai help also yeah I asked help ai to see my mistakes if I did something wrong. But guys please at least read story after complain it to me I will listen. I got the different idea so I made it

Between your first post being 100% AI slop, and this post demonstrating your english comprehension. We dont need to read your story to tell you to go and fix your english before we can have any constructive discourse.

Luqu · Jan 26, 2026

Alski said:
Between your first post being 100% AI slop, and this post demonstrating your english comprehension. We dont need to read your story to tell you to go and fix your english before we can have any constructive discourse.

Sorry and thanks telling my mistakes. It's because I am new and did some selfishness. I will stop it do some genuinely work. If you guys interested you can see my work and comment it. I don't mind if it is hate comment or good one. So thanks to all telling my mistakes . I will work hard now ?

L1aei · Jan 26, 2026

Luqu said:
Sorry and thanks telling my mistakes. It's because I am new and did some selfishness. I will stop it do some genuinely work. If you guys interested you can see my work and comment it. I don't mind if it is hate comment or good one. So thanks to all telling my mistakes . I will work hard now ?

You just got called out for AI slop and responded like a customer-service bot.

That's... impressive, but not in the way you want.

Lookbehindyou · Jan 26, 2026

blud you have two passionate commentators who talk exactly like you with all the "bro bro bro", both accounts were made under a week ago, they only have you in their reading list, both rate the story five stars, both have only ever commented on your story

I can't tell which is worse, you got your friends to glaze you

Or you made alts to glaze yourself and even talk to them

You also have 5 followers, all no pfp and fresh out the oven. 2 now deleted + 3 fresh accounts following you, a fresh account yourself, and 5 5-star ratings? What a coincidence...

...

Is this a bannable offense?

L1aei · Jan 26, 2026

Lookbehindyou said:
Is this a bannable offense?

I don't even need popcorn for this; just my fallout shelter and a Geiger counter.

FRWriter · Jan 26, 2026

I will stop commenting and wish the guy luck with his story. Rather than his tricks, the thing that truly baffles me is that he does put in the effort to use AI and manipulative votes, but does not check or hide what he is doing. It all screams half-assed.

L1aei · Jan 26, 2026

FRWriter said:
I will stop commenting and wish the guy luck with his story. Rather than his tricks, the thing that truly baffles me is that he does put in the effort to use AI and manipulative votes, but does not check or hide what he is doing. It all screams half-assed.

Like I said, impressive.

Luqu · Jan 26, 2026

Ok so I should quit now right ?. I will end it. I will not continue it. Yeah you got me I am getting fake comments ,likes , rating. So I will quit ?. Stop writing the novel now

L1aei · Jan 26, 2026

Luqu said:
Ok so I should quit now right ?. I will end it. I will not continue it. Yeah you got me I am getting fake comments ,likes , rating. So I will quit ?. Stop writing the novel now

You say that before making this comment.

Why would anyone follow your story if, well, you can't even keep your story straight.

Arkus86 · Jan 26, 2026

Luqu said:
Ok so I should quit now right ?. I will end it. I will not continue it. Yeah you got me I am getting fake comments ,likes , rating. So I will quit ?. Stop writing the novel now

It seems you were never writing the story in the first place. You were either writing a draft and letting the AI make the finished product, or worse, you were just prompting the AI.

If you are serious about writing, scrap everything you have posted and start again, with your own words. Use AI to check your grammar if you must, but do not copy-paste the result. Fix your own mistakes and learn from them.

CountVanBadger · Jan 26, 2026

Firestorm22345? Is that you? Are you making new accounts since you said you wouldn't be posting anything with your original account anymore?

L1aei · Jan 26, 2026

CountVanBadger said:
Firestorm22345? Is that you? Are you making new accounts since you said you wouldn't be posting anything with your original account anymore?

You know this fella?

CountVanBadger · Jan 26, 2026

L1aei said:
You know this fella?

Another new member with virtually no grasp of the English language who calls people "bro" or "brother" in every other post. A couple days ago he said he was going to stop posting on here because he had to go back to school, and then lo and behold, this guy appears.

What's your fearest genres you ever read?

So basically, I have two genres that I mostly feared, Horror and Romance. Horror always make my soul leaves my body without any warning. For example, you were reading it until the scary part came like "It's staring at (MC). It never leaves. It stalks at (MC), ignoring the time". Yea, I don't...

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