I broke a marriage and rebuilt a soul. Is my Yuri NTR too intense? Looking for honest thoughts!

Coldwarrior12

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Just finished my short novel "Married to a Man, Belonging to My Psychologist" and I need your honest, raw opinion.

It’s a 5-chapter journey of psychological domination, breaking a marriage, and total ownership. Is it too intense, or just right?

Read it here

Yeah its a yuri NTR, so it's only for the yuri lovers
 

Anonjohn20

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It sounds like it would be a massive hit in the Asian market. Rather than 5 chapters, have you considered making 400-800 tiny chapters and posting one a day on Webnovel?
 
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