Please give me your feedback to turn memoir into "novel story"

Rolanov · Jan 23, 2026

Greetings, I'm Daeron

I'm still super newbie at literature art. Usually I only vent ideas into raw writing for lyrical purposes.
But recently, i want to try something new, to turn my part of past story or memoir into "novel story"
Your feedbacks are appreciated.

Here's my Story : Soft Illusion : Ad Finem Amore

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Haycielo · Jan 23, 2026

Do you have any guideline you'd like me to focus on while reading?

Rolanov · Jan 23, 2026

Haycielo said:
Do you have any guideline you'd like me to focus on while reading?

hmm, more like at structure i must focus on, and whether you get the "feeling" while reading it or not. Because the idea was, I want to make the readers to embrace how it feels.

Rolanov · Jan 23, 2026

Daeron said:
Greetings, I'm Daeron

I'm still super newbie at literature art. Usually I only vent ideas into raw writing for lyrical purposes.
But recently, i want to try something new, to turn my part of past story or memoir into "novel story"
Your feedbacks are appreciated.

Here's my Story : Soft Illusion : Ad Finem Amore

Or you can click at my signature below.

I'll try to rewrite this whole writing, and expand more at chapter 4, maybe i'll split those chapter become 2 later. I'll expand about how we built our business instead just spouting the result. And to give more perspective regarding Claudia.

Haycielo · Jan 23, 2026

Hey Daeron, I left a comment under chapter 1 please let me know if that's the right place to leave my feedback

Rolanov · Jan 28, 2026

Haycielo said:
Hey Daeron, I left a comment under chapter 1 please let me know if that's the right place to leave my feedback

Hi, I'm sorry i just got back from abroad. I decided to rewrite whole stories to be more detailed one.

Rolanov · Jan 29, 2026

I'm planning to push my writing until chapter 4 this week. I want to expand the memoir to be more detailed, so it'll not sound like rushed story.
I'll use explicit Violence and Sexual, because i don't want leave any single detail that will ruin the emotional weight.

Please give me your feedback to turn memoir into "novel story"

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