This Is How You Died. Zomboid Fanfic. Looking for feedback.

H0LL0W

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I am doing zomboid runs and posting fanfics about them.
I am bad at writing in first person. I'm trying to do that with this story, but only for the first part. I'd like some feedback on it. Is this any good? Should I go back to third person omniscient?
Here is the link to my story

This Is How You Died

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AliceMoonvale

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I really love Project Zomboid, but I really hate first-person.
But I also really like the style as if I'm reading someone's notes I found on a zomboid server.

Honestly, go for it.
Good chance I'll read through more of it, personally.

I'd want to write my own for shits and giggles.
With my modded game, I get into some pretty normal stuff.

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Just wanted to say, thanks to your post, I was able to post my own version based off PZ.
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H0LL0W

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AliceMoonvale said:
Just wanted to say, thanks to your post, I was able to post my own version based off PZ.
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I read your story! I like it so much! And the cover is really cool too, it fits the story. Mine is just a placeholder for now. Your story inspires me to try harder!
 
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H0LL0W said:
I read your story! I like it so much! And the cover is really cool too, it fits the story. Mine is just a placeholder for now. Your story inspires me to try harder!
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Awe, thank you! It's my fun little side-project.
I look forward to see where you take your story as well! It gave me the inspiration/motivation to write my own after all.

I just hope my story gets properly indexed into the system one day, though I doubt it at this point. lol
For now, it's an exclusive secret! :blob_shade:
 
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