This is my first story, and I would like some feedback please.

VM_Belwynd

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I am a first time author, and would like some feedback on my book and writing style.

I currently have 7 chapters, but 1 is prologue and another is interlude, so technically only 5.

 

Failnot

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After a quick read of the prologue, u seem to be using a lot of AI assistance. It's kind of hard to judge its merit and your style if it's so AI manipulated. Even if you're not super good at english, I think it's better to put that out there instead of something that isn't wholly yours so that you can grow as an author. If I'm mistaken, sorry for this lol
 

VM_Belwynd

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thanks for the feedback, I have been using the ai in ProWritingAid to help rewrite some things. I will try to use it less.
 
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