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    Writing What is your favorite protagonists hair color?

    silver is best although purple or crimson comes close.
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    Psychological of Color [Let's Learn About Color]

    Thanks it was amazing read.
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    Why must it be a sword, especially in eastern cultivation, namely the jian sword?

    Honestly, I am bigger fan of spear and bow than Sword, sword is over used atp.
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    Can someone review my story (don't hold back)

    How do I add my book in like my profile?
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    Can someone review my story (don't hold back)

    There are many things, so I would advise you to read and write as much as possible so you would get a feel for what is right and all that.
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    Can someone review my story (don't hold back)

    Yes sir much better.
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    Can someone review my story (don't hold back)

    "As the sun settles in the dim lights of evening , we see a fourteen year old boy wearing black pajamas and a dark blue hoodie , Tatami Toriyama , walking on the side walk sighing as a memory of his father and mother flashes , and his father speaking in a sweet tone" Better. But there is still...
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    Resolved Looking for Blood Mage Isekai Litrpg

    Idk. What specific novel you are talking abou but if you want you could read Blood warlock succubus partner in the apocalypse. One of the best litrpg, blood power and well written series.
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    Can someone review my story (don't hold back)

    I think you are too new to it. Well, first of all start reading good webnovels like SS, LOTM, ORV and all that, you have a very amateur way to write right now you use. "We see" and "flashback comes of his father and mother where his father says" that's like telling a act or something just go...
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