Recent content by YusakuRay

I guess I have a small annoyance, it's not a complaint about anyone, it's just that I don't get comments even when there's a good decent amount of views, I'd like to improve what I lack on and it's kind of hard when i'm not getting comments. I can't tell if I'm improving or lacking? I'm probably...

what imgur link do you use for the source, i feel like i tried everything but the image won't show. Edit: Thank you two for helping :cry:

How did you put up your cover art on a chapter permanently, everytime I put an image up using it from discord it goes away after a few days? I don't think you can upload an image either.

Reckless college boy who often dies in dumb and goreish ways, enjoys teasing his elf gf in world he is isekai'd/moved to, Often speaking before thinking about what he says which creates misunderstandings at times

What's the successor project? Can you let us know if it becomes a thing, i'd like to post on other sites but I'm too paranoid about having my content stolen, hoping to branch out soon, also being able to make revisions to my earlier chapters would be nice when posting on another site.

Got it, I revised it and it fits better now I believe. Thank you so much for taking a look at it. I get so excited when writing these scenes my mind gets ahead of itself a lot of the time... :blob_sweat::blobthumbsup:

Yeah its a sort of earthbending/dnd like people in this world can use magic to mold earth into whatever shape they like so my MC chose to make his normal longsword into a greatsword using the earth of the stone platform. Cain swong over him so Kosei blocked his attack using his greatsword as a...

Hi y'all I was hoping to ask for some advice and general tips on an action sequence I made in my story and if its easy to follow along. Of course only if you have the time to read I'll leave the quote below so you wont have to look through the whole chapter for it...

would uncanny be a better word than deafening? I also already revised what you suggested just now. thank you again. might just stick with "Silence...etc"

sure chapter's about to release in 30 mins so i dont mind but here I'll leave some context too ((("Believe me kid, I hate to kill prey we don't bother to eat, but I suppose there's something to be said about no witnesses. Right?" The other Ogre nods. "I'll make as painless as possible don't you...

Quick Question. Is there no time at all caps should be used like you said or say for example someone pleading for their life it could be used there or is it just a no-no overall. ( Also side update I feel my writing style is improving writing each chapter so thank you again I decided to update...

Thank you so much for your comment I'll begin revising it immediately, I struggle a lot with run-on sentences lol but I think it's been getting better in recent chapter's? at least I hope i'm improving thanks again for the advice and help I'll be sure to keep improving my writing style and...

good instrumental music (divine service and why are my favorites)

wow is the first thing i have to say after reading this, it was a bit hard to follow at first but then it started making sense and became really enjoyable to read. being able to see what would make you turn the page really gives me a mental image in my mind of what readers look for in a web...

I see, though what I thought from what meant as "dry" was to add more backbone to the world which i put in from Gobbi's description from the two lands, also the addition of a suspense scene giving the MC echoes of the future from people he hasnt met yet i feel like is a good hook. I did skim...