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Xxizl replied to the thread Looking for feedback. Tell me what I could improve!.Thank you! I appreciate it.
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Xxizl reacted to AliceMoonvale's post in the thread Looking for feedback. Tell me what I could improve! with
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Thankfully, I'm very unapologetic and I don't care how successful someone is or not. I'm also lazy. So here's my quick, unbiased... -
Xxizl replied to the thread Looking for feedback. Tell me what I could improve!.Thank you! I'll keep that in mind!!
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Xxizl reacted to Rookieqw's post in the thread Looking for feedback. Tell me what I could improve! with Like.
You are a better author than I'll ever be, so I can't help you in terms of grammar and story. Keep going! But people had taught me that...
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Xxizl reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Looking for feedback. Tell me what I could improve! with Like.
Honestly... I have no comment. Your fiction is already quite competitive in SH's trending (mine doesn't even deserve a mention). If you...
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Xhttps://www.scribblehub.com/series/2188101/the-young-masters-maid-talks-too-much/
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Xxizl reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread I hope you read my novel *The Exodia Saga* and provide any feedback for improvement. with Like.
Well, I have some feedback to improve your fiction packaging for engagement: (1) Create a structured chapter numbering format to make...
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XHello everyone! I recently started posting my story SPARROW FLIGHT here. It's a writing x comic fusion project about a single dad trying...
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Xxizl reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread First-Person POV or Third-Person / Author POV? with Like.
I closed my eyes to the second example. Which is better, the first POV or the third POV? The short answer is, it depends on your...
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Xxizl replied to the thread First-Person POV or Third-Person / Author POV?.It really depends on your goals with the story and how you would like to present it. First person allows for the audience to immerse...
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Xxizl replied to the thread Tried drawing a Cat for the First time.Super deep voice: “I desire the wet food tonight, Mother.”
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XImagine if your cat turned into this shit and you find it standing over your bed looking down on you first thing you wake up lol. And...
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Xxizl replied to the thread Tried drawing a Cat for the First time.How does the lighting make it even scarier 😭
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Xxizl reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Writing How important are dialogue tags in your fiction? with Like.
I mentioned earlier in this thread the use of dialogue tags as a practical tool for character navigation in web novel chapters. We can't...
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Xxizl replied to the thread Writing How important are dialogue tags in your fiction?.I actually recommend often using said over any alternatives, unless it's expressing an emotion or action important to the scene. I use...