Recent content by worldismyne

  1. worldismyne

    Should we reveal infrequent POV shifts?

    If it's in first person? I prefer to be told when the POV shifts. If it's 3rd person omniscient, naw, context clues are fine.
  2. worldismyne

    How do you consider an Image to be posted in the story SFW/NSFW?

    Would you show it to your boss at your day job? That's what Safe For Work means. Would you be able to get away looking at it in a professional work space? Think of your readers who are scrolling on their lunch break for something to read and tag accordingly. You should heed the warnings of...
  3. worldismyne

    Something that is written very elegantly.

    The Deathless | Scribble Hub Isekai/Fantasy Ex: "She had missed her first shot. The thought of leaving without her prey brought hot shame to her face, but she was managing to keep it at bay, for now. Following a hurt game into the White Death and coming back out with its carcass was necessary...
  4. worldismyne

    Paralysis to start due to limited vocabulary and inability to convey ideas or create an intriguing story

    Your first draft isn't your final draft. There's a writing style known as 'snowflake' writing. You write the basic things first (like one-sentence summaries of scenes) from start to finish. Then you go back and make the outline more complex. Then go to each of those sentences and build them out...
  5. worldismyne

    Are there any sort of tropes or generally common story choices that make perfect sense but you just don't like?

    Someone falling into insta love with an unconscious person they never talked to before, especially if the person falling in love is in a healer/doctor/nurse role. I get that attraction is something some people can't control, but so often the narrator/POV doesn't address the ethical...
  6. worldismyne

    I need help... again.

    If it's digital, I'll usually base paint off of a reference. Then, if I want to change the direction/color of the lighting, I'll throw a few layers over the entire piece on multiply or light opacity. Then you can carve where the light should go with the eraser tool and blend the edges. You can...
  7. worldismyne

    How long will your fiction last?

    I actually print out and hand bind the stories that mean the most to me. I've had a few hard drive crashes and account hack scares in my lifetime. Waaaay back in the day my rough drafts would be hand written, but I got impatient over the years. So, base on how my family hands family records...
  8. worldismyne

    How to write popsicle sucking scene?

    Depends on who's initiating and when the characters confessed. If it's your taster Thiris has excellent jumping off points for descriptions. Just paint that with the brush of the characters personal experience. Have they dreamt about this moment before, or is it a heat of the moment thing? Have...
  9. worldismyne

    Apparently I Have Bad Taste

    Boy oh boy, when I tell you the things I put my whole heart in will connect strongly with like one guy, I really appreciate that one guy. Then the stuff I make on a whim gets liked by the right person and that's the one people want follow ups for. It's like that with art too. I got one print...
  10. worldismyne

    Adventure/Fantasy-story writers, how do you keep travel sequences interesting?

    I usually will include a vital character moment when they're traveling, something the characters share or see that changes them if I really need a travel scene. If the scene would be static walking in the woods, I time skip.
  11. worldismyne

    Writing Prose quality check?

    Short sentences are good for action scenes. I wouldn't use "thunder" twice in such a small section. In general there's a focus on sound. Adding some other senses will make the scene feel more real. (Is the metal ground cold or hot, what does the meat taste like, what does the arena smell...
  12. worldismyne

    How to write popsicle sucking scene?

    What do you want your readers to feel about the scene? (arousal, laughter, fear, disgust, etc) That will be your guiding light for what adjectives you want to use and what you're focusing on. Are you trying to showcase the character's vulnerability, desire, or care for the other person...
  13. worldismyne

    Young Gods - Art Gallery

    Delphi studying three types of divination at one time.
  14. worldismyne

    Writing Why would you study creative writing if a good narrative doesn't guarantee popularity?

    I think anytime someone writes or makes art to be popular, they've already sabotaged their process. There is no amount of popularity that will ever be enough, no amount of money or views that will cure someone of imposter syndrome or manufacture a sense of belonging. The study of creative...
Top