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I think that's a good idea. Being aware of the rhythm of your prose in general is something to always keep in mind. Good talk.

Has this happened to you? You carefully choreograph a fight scene, punch by punch, sword swing by sword swing. Every dodge, every block...

So the good thing about this prose is that you're using strong evocative words: shuddered, crashed, swallowed, thundered, clawed...