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I wonder what the texture of them is like. If it isn't that different, I could probably gaslight myself into eating them

Yes. The speed at which you read needs to follow the action and pace of the fight. ^ This is supposed to be the buildup to the climax...

Out of curiosity, what is the context of the entire fight?

You're the one who said that light novels are worse than western novels. If you really want to write something you have such a negative...

I don't feel there are really any stakes here at all... Dude snuck up behind him and wacked him on the head, then finished him off...

Hahaha Yeah, from my perspective, I thought it was some teenage squire or something sneaking up on the dude with a hammer and...

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Time just skipped forward an hour and I should probably go to bed...

I don't understand this mentality at all. You know that one is better than the other, but you're still consciously choosing the inferior...

To start off, here are my smaller gripes: 1. I hate stories where the author thinks every sentence deserves to be its own paragraph. Why...

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Don’t worry too much about it. Some authors tag their stories as smut but the first sex scene doesn’t even appear until after 100+ chapters.

sorry, but I intend to write a Light Novel format, not western style novel. It seems like your narration style leans to that part, on...