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Sounds fine to me. It isn't too verbose, so your readers should be able to retain most of it without you having to repeat it later.

To address your questions, and offer a bit of advice. First, the advice. Keep doing what you're doing. It is working quite well. It...

What you need to ask yourself: Does your information advance the plot? Does it emerge organically through character interactions? Does...

Thank you everyone for the advice, I will try to split it up into questions and answers more.

So in this situation, my deuteragonist, is trying to explain the bond to the protagonist. He has been transported to the world, has no...

nope that is exactly what I was looking for thanks. I knew I had seen them somewhere before, just couldn't seem to find them easily.

I was just wondering is there a post or link or something to the rules of what is allowable for creators to post on book content for...

Thank you. It is a prologue, so not sure how much character depth or personality I should create, without overloading it, but I can work...

I'm VM Belwynd—Army vet, farm kid, and lifelong fantasy reader. Raised on McCaffrey, Salvatore, and Greenwood; discovered harem stories...

Looking for some feedback on my story, positive or negative, I have no problems with criticism. I currently have 7 chapters, one being a...

You do know that you can change that under the Style Guides in ProWriting Aid, if you don't like it. It is under the Inclusive Language...

thanks for the feedback, I have been using the ai in ProWritingAid to help rewrite some things. I will try to use it less.