Recent content by Trashcat

Thank you. I'll be editing my cover a bit, and replacing the current one. I've read your prologue, and I think it's well-written. Emotions are conveyed nicely, with palpable tension between the characters. It's easy to read, and the descriptions are not overwhelming. I'm excited to see the...

I'm not sure if you wanted feedback, as it's not specified in your post, but here goes: The cover is a little dark, so it's difficult to make out the details, but I love your character profile artwork. It's cute, simple, aesthetically pleasing, and vibrant. The prologue starts strong and...

MC has a gun, and a phone so its not medieval. I'd describe it as overlapping dimensions. Ravenhide is a mystery and soon you'll see it from the perspective of another character. Some harmful monsters are wild, others disguise themselves as humans so they live like humans. Not all monsters are...

This is an interesting piece of history, I went down the rabbit hole and found out that the long version of the summoning phrase was "Change change o form of man, release the might from fleshy mire, boil the blood in heart of fire. Gone gone the form of man, rise the Demon Etrigan." I'm liking...

The story combines prose and verse, and the MC is a weirdo who loves rhyming (and also since I grew up reading nursery rhymes). I agree with the sentences being broken up; making it a single row is a better choice unless it's a full-blown poem. I've heard of Etrigan from the DC comics, but I...

I've lost count of the number of times I've edited the story, but yes, it's better to polish one before branching out to others. My feedback for you will be up soon (y) I'll look into the text thing, probably need to remove the formatting. Thank you for the reads and likes, it makes me happy...

That's great, just read as much as you're comfortable with and I'll do the same. Updates are slow because Im doing another round of edits, but I'll try to update consistently.

I'm a new writer, and I am having issues attracting readers. It could be the type of story, or it could be website visibility, but despite my writing, rewriting, countless edits, and trying to advertise, I'm still stuck in the shadows, cursed to drown in the abyss. Apologies for being...

So... I just got roasted 2 days ago (not too much/not enough?), and I'm prepared for more. My novel is currently going through its 11th editing phase, and I would like to get more input since it's always stuck in the shadows and is incapable of attracting readers, also because I'm new here and I...