Alright guys so this is my first official writing so i need a review and areas you think i need to improve on
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2234656/twilight/
for my latest chapter i've asked a question too so give me your thoughts on that too
nuh uh it is AI generated
firstly the wording like resonance and some other technical terms
no one in their right or even wrong mind would use that for the readers
some more words here and there feel off
and finally the formatting of that synopsis
yeah no one is putting in that much effort...