Recent content by TooThunder7

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    Story ideas

    He sigh deal before he fight also the opponent he fight also sighed a deal before the fight. It all legal. Also he has lawyers that take care of the legal trouble.
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    Offering feedback on your first chapter

    I just wanted to know what people thought of the idea overall nothing specific. Like if was cool or interesting.
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    Offering feedback on your first chapter

    Yeah what do you think of the idea overall?
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    Story ideas

    Story ideas this guy Zack who 16 has super strength every fighting tournament he enter MMA,Boxing, etc he win he end alway accidentally killed his opponent in the first round he the campaign in all major fight tournament/event/sport. Zack go to underground illegal fight rings where anything go...
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    stylizing problem

    Story ideas this guy Zack who 16 has super strength every fighting tournament he enter MMA,Boxing, etc he win he end alway accidentally killed his opponent in the first round he the campaign in all major fight tournament/event/sport. Zack go to underground illegal fight rings where anything go...
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    Low attention span reviews and ratings [Closed]

    Story ideas this guy Zack who 16 has super strength every fighting tournament he enter MMA,Boxing, etc he win he end alway accidentally killed his opponent in the first round he the campaign in all major fight tournament/event/sport. Zack go to underground illegal fight rings where anything go...
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    Offering feedback on your first chapter

    Story ideas this guy Zack who 16 has super strength every fighting tournament he enter MMA,Boxing, etc he win he end alway accidentally killed his opponent in the first round he the campaign in all major fight tournament/event/sport. Zack go to underground illegal fight rings where anything go...
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    Story ideas

    Talk about your story Story ideas this guy Zack who 16 has super strength every fighting tournament he enter MMA,Boxing, etc he win he end alway accidentally killed his opponent in the first round he the campaign in all major fight tournament/event/sport. Zack go to underground illegal fight...
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    I'll read your first chapter and tell you my opinion on it

    Story ideas this guy Zack who 16 has super strength every fighting tournament he enter MMA,Boxing, etc he win he end alway accidentally killed his opponent in the first round he the campaign in all major fight tournament/event/sport. Zack go to underground illegal fight rings where anything go...
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    I'll read your first chapter and tell you my opinion on it

    This is the beginning of book my working on called A.K.L it about assassins. I’m looking for feedback in general. The A.K.L is Japanese assassins organization. We follow Gkoet an assassin who skill make up for being messy their no doubt he the fastest when come to anything. He constantly taking...
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    The stories you never wrote. Post those misbegotten and unborn phantasms here.

    I ideal for story it called Shadow a 14 teenager who became the vigilante Shadow. Shadow is set in year 2035. Shadow is set in alternate timeline where in 1960 the president term was extended from 4 to 10. Superheroes and has been around since the 1940. In 1960 the superhero government or SHG...
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    Story sharing.

    Hi
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    Story sharing.

    I don’t have a name for the Cowboy story. For now I just calling it The Cowboy Story or TCS for short. TCS is set in the 1800th. Johnny is 200 year old people in the story get their cursed weapon through deal with demons,ghosts,spirits ,and gods. Johnny and Joe met at a bar where Johnny was...
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    Story sharing.

    one story ideas I have involving theses cowboys who have cursed weapons. The main character would be guy Johnny who has sword that make immortal him. He got his sword from his father who given his sword saving him. Another guy Joe has cursed gun that never missed he can have the aim at his...
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