Recent content by tlo4654

I understand! This was so enlightening, thank you. 😭🙏🏻 It’s too late for me to do it tonight but tomorrow I’m going to go back through my current chapters and see where I can make things more from Lila’s perspective. Maybe it’s because I’ve only ever written from omniscient third or first POV...

😱 that was definitely not my intention!! She’s supposed to be a distinct character, a medical student that has been dropped into another world. Pragmatic and rational yet she hides her emotional inner world. I honestly thought my main character was the strongest point of my opening so this is...

The idea was to be third person limited, as if we are directly in Lila’s mind experiencing the world alongside her. I chose that POV because I wanted readers to feel connected to my main character and experience the world through her eyes. See how her biases and thoughts interact with others...

Hello everyone! I just discovered ScribbleHub and posted the first ~7 chapters of my story. I haven’t had anyone (beta) read it yet so I would love some feedback on even the first chapter! Thank you 💕 https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2252300/nerim-path-to-ascension/

Here’s mine! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2252300/nerim-path-to-ascension/