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I would only shift from 1st to 3rd with a chapter ending/beginning... and hold it through thechapter. With a scene change, it will not...

and, for a small fee, we'll keep it that way now that we know!

yoiung i always called it writing by description, which is 3rd person. when i finally tried first person and more or less switched to...

just plain death, until major decomposition occurs, is actually a slightly sweet but garbage like smell. its called "morgue odor" and it...

I find slice of life to be much like pure romance (not sex). Bor-ing by itself as the only theme. But mixed with another genre, they...

burger joint, nevafrost. So... you want to go to a place called five guys, to... eat meat. ooooo-kay. too much information, dear. *kek*

there's a lot of little stuff that comes across well in writing about love. Honestly, who hasn't been in love asnd should already know...

I agreee. My one recurring MC, its kind of liberating that he's good at hurting and taking human life. I think a morally good character...

thanks!

uh huh. writing purple prose is hard enough. you can speak it off the top of your head. that's *not* a skill one is born with, little...

eldoria. you continue to impress me with your precise speech grammar and vocabulary, as well as specialized knowledge of the writing...

maybe the world could narrate. as if the biosphere, was a living sentient entity. it could take over the third person narration of the...

I do sentence fragments on numbered lines when I outline. tiny goal of chapter, nothing more. sometimes, in reading passes, I notice...

There's such a thing as "being different" and then there's "being so different that you drive people away in droves" - be careful to...

Well, I'll give you some feedback to make your chapter 'easy to read' on mobile (readtable and mobile friendly): (1) Make short...