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TheKillingAlice reacted to Worthy39's post in the thread What would you say you struggle to write most? with
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TheKillingAlice reacted to thegingernut's post in the thread What would you say you struggle to write most? with Haha.
Smut scenes. My asexual ass don't know what to be doing besides cut to black. That's actually why half my characters are underage. So I...
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TheKillingAlice reacted to FRWriter's post in the thread Managed to reach chapter 10 on here again! with Like.
1. You don't have a signature. 2. Ban evading can get your account banned as far as I know. Just make sure you don't break the rules...
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TheKillingAlice replied to the thread Managed to reach chapter 10 on here again!.Did you try contacting Forum Mods or Tony himself via Email? There is one, actually. :blob_blank:
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The Silver Debt | Scribble Hub Please leave a review of my story so I can get some feedback and stay motivated to keep writing
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TheKillingAlice replied to the thread Need a feedback on my story.I do love your Cover. Maybe I would have moved a few things a smidge, but that would be very nitpicky. :blob_cookie: There you go...
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TheKillingAlice replied to the thread Looking for feedback on the Prologue of my work.Tomato? :blob_cookie: I actually read not the entire Prologue, but around 1/3 or 1/4 of it. I felt it was indeed written well in...
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Keep in mind the average reader is dumb, and a story might get disliked simply because it dumps too many words at them all at once, or...
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TheKillingAlice reacted to melcastanet's post in the thread Thinking about changing my upload time with Like.
I think a statistical approach is better than basing yourself on logic. Maybe try the time switch and see if it changes anything in your...
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TheKillingAlice replied to the thread 🌠🌌🌟🌌🌠Fateful Events🌠🌌🌟🌌🌠.Also, because this was still open in a lost tab and I just realized it was moved to Story Feedback, I also saw you made that change...
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TheKillingAlice reacted to Lufli's post in the thread What do you think about my first chapter? with Haha.
Hello, kind souls. As some of you know, I've been training my novel openings for quite some time now. I'm curious whether this story...
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TheKillingAlice replied to the thread What do you think about my first chapter?.Bold of you to assume anyone will read a chapter in order to find out if they would want to read it. :blob_cookie: I wouldn't. At...
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TheKillingAlice reacted to LiteraryWho's post in the thread Are there any sort of tropes or generally common story choices that make perfect sense but you just don't like? with Sad.
Sounds like a you problem, tbh :blob_evil_two::blob_whistle: And on that subject, I dislike both the modern notion, and the trope, that...
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TheKillingAlice replied to the thread Are there any sort of tropes or generally common story choices that make perfect sense but you just don't like?.What does one thing have to do with the other tho? The idea of love being something you "choose" is, in essence, you just growing to...
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TheKillingAlice reacted to BearlyAlive's post in the thread SUPER-DUPER IMPORTANT QUESTION with Like.
The question doesn't include the differences that come with using the actual languages. Japanese is context-heavy; not only do they...