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TheKillingAlice replied to the thread Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open].Well, I just went through the first chapter, trying to see it through the lens of what is or isn't important to the objective of the... -
TheKillingAlice replied to the thread Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open].This was so on purpose. I had an obvious Gate, and I couldn't help myself. :blob_cookie: The thing is, a new reader put out that the...
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TheKillingAlice reacted to TASTYLEADPAINT's post in the thread Ask The Wandering Storyteller #2 with
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TheKillingAlice reacted to AliceMoonvale's post in the thread ADHD feedback for your chapters with Haha.
Jesus gave him a prostate exam free of charge.
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TheKillingAlice reacted to AliceMoonvale's post in the thread How Wild Can a Novel Get to be Published on Scribble Hub? with Like.
I'd recommend not writing things that could land you on a watch list or in prison irl. :blob_popcorn:
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TheKillingAlice reacted to Rosica's post in the thread How Wild Can a Novel Get to be Published on Scribble Hub? with Like.
It's a phase.
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TheKillingAlice replied to the thread How Wild Can a Novel Get to be Published on Scribble Hub?.Why do you keep yelling that at me? :blob_cookie: Also, no shade on some good gore and smut, but it must make sense, no? If it's just...
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TheKillingAlice replied to the thread Story Final.You shouldn't know how to start a story, if you don't know how to end it. :blob_cookie: Although it may reshape or change entirely over...
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TheKillingAlice reacted to AliceMoonvale's post in the thread ADHD feedback for your chapters with Haha.
Well, off the bat, the synopsis is kind of.. generic? Very broad terms in there and feels slightly dragging/boring. I'd recommend...
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TheKillingAlice replied to the thread ADHD feedback for your chapters.Jesus wept. :blob_cookie:
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TheKillingAlice replied to the thread Means vs. End.I made no choice on the poll, because I would say "both". :blob_cookie: Obviously, the way needs to entertain me, in order for me to...
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I'll go risk my neck for this and say that the end justifies the means. I'll go compare this with two TV shows I love, Game of Thrones...
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TheKillingAlice reacted to Bimbanana's post in the thread Could you please tell why this story sucks? with Like.
Gasp! Sorry! Old habit! Yes, it should be "cover"!
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TheKillingAlice replied to the thread Could you please tell why this story sucks?.It's called a "Cover". Don't teach him wrong, he's already copying you. Bad, Bimbanana. What "Poster"? Fucking hell. :blob_popcorn_two...
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TheKillingAlice reacted to Bimbanana's post in the thread Could you please tell why this story sucks? with Like.
1. Your poster and title not engaging. 2. Your synopsis also bad. Like okay.... what the heck is malformed? what the heck is elite of...