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Fair enough. That doesn't usually happen where I come from. :blob_cookie:

In Arizona, America, ambulance truck-kun jump into you.

Wouldn't jumping into traffic be the fastest way, though? :blob_cookie:

They can't afford to be a patient. Healthcare is expensive.

If a Publishing House is your goal, don't post anything online. Polish your Script, at least in terms of story and character progression...

That's odd. My story initially had the protagonist die in the prologue and wake up in the other world in chapter 1. At the end of the...

I get it, I think, or it's because I sleep butt naked. Either way I gotta have my blanket, AC on at 61F and a box fan to drown out the...

It's only dark magic when i turn the lights off. This does explain why you never pick up the phone when I call. That makes me feel a lot...

Hell, no. I could never. Not in this lifetime. But the house I live in is also quite old, so I wonder if this type of glass is just an...

I wish I could be that savage with my feedback. To OP: You’ve showered your synopsis with adjectives and buzzwords that don’t earn...

The gist of your story is about this: Why are you spinning around in worldbuilding? Giving a synopsis with worldbuilding is the best...

I CANNOT sleep unless everything but my head is covered in a blanket. I can be sweating my balls off, and it doesn't matter. I'm not...

It could be grounded in the same feeling, indeed. Like, I don't scare or feel eerie easily. If there's a weird sound that seems too...

Okay. My first thought was: LONG. Longer than any of the synopsis from most of the books on my shelf. This is how long the synopsis is...

I don't know, this is quite specific. I don't like windows or glass in general on doors. When a window isn't covered from the outside -...