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TheIcMan replied to the thread Feedback wanted for first few chapters of unposted story.Hmm. Gotcha. I feel like it'd be a much easier read if you named the two girls immediately: That way it's easier to associate the... -
TheIcMan reacted to blushiemagic's post in the thread Feedback wanted for first few chapters of unposted story with
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It's kind of a weird situation where Rayna and Lillian each have their own personality but they both still share the same mind, so the... -
TheIcMan replied to the thread Feedback wanted for first few chapters of unposted story.Yeah I'm confused with the pronouns. Is Thomas they now because he's two girls or what?
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TheIcMan reacted to L1aei's post in the thread Feedback wanted for first few chapters of unposted story with Like.
Just to clarify something before any of us get into this: are we dealing with one person possessing the bodies of two others or does...
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TheIcMan replied to the thread Warning to all Authors, do not fall victim to "professional editors.".Oh, yeah, this is what I got with Tapas like 10 years ago. Had a very convincing email sent to me about signing me up for a contract...
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Oh wow, thank you so much! I think i get it now after read your example. It's like my thought talking to me. like this part : It feels...
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TheIcMan replied to the thread [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters).>me when i want to read, but the god damn page is nuked
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TheIcMan replied to the thread Deep POV Story.Ehh, I really feel like this is just a level of experience you need to have. Frankly, I just have umbrage with "deep" being a new word...
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TheIcMan replied to the thread Is This Chapter 1 Good Enough? (Part 2).Read enough slop and you appreciate even things that do stuff just decently :blobrofl:
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TheIcMan replied to the thread Is This Chapter 1 Good Enough? (Part 2).Oh nice. Hmmmm... Okay for rating: Two things. If the last two sentences weren't there, it'd be an 8/10. Otherwise it reads pretty...
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TheIcMan replied to the thread Would love your feedback, reviews, rating and criticism.on god??? genuine question here: was AI used at all in this response. because good lord is it a night and day difference from the...
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TheIcMan reacted to ekam's post in the thread Would love your feedback, reviews, rating and criticism with Like.
I haven’t responded yet because I wanted to make sure I addressed this with a clear head. (and i was working on fiverr to earn bread, so...
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TheIcMan replied to the thread Would love your feedback, reviews, rating and criticism.which is the crux of the issue. being afraid to make mistakes and being ashamed of it is fine. but own up to it. people will make fun of...
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TheIcMan replied to the thread Would love your feedback, reviews, rating and criticism.Ah yeah, when like half of the posts are AI written and try to pass it off as not? Yep. Hell on earth I say. It's funny mr. OP hasn't...
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TheIcMan replied to the thread Would love your feedback, reviews, rating and criticism.What's this about?