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I'm sad AI has replaced just generic grammar checking. You don't need any of the shitter llms to check if what you have is grammatically...

Das my EW squad

Yes. The speed at which you read needs to follow the action and pace of the fight. ^ This is supposed to be the buildup to the climax...

In my opinion, it feels flat. I have trouble keeping up with who's perspective the scene is supposed to be following, but that may be...

Yeah you're both lacking and overdoing it. You're lacking the actual tension and scene of the fight, and you're overdoing everything...

Ohh this is an AU. I'm not a fan of them 🥹 But honestly the way you write is engaging, and my personal preference in style. This isn't...

If your work is AI, I'm not wasting my time on it. This doesn't read like low fantasy to me at all. It also has that feel of being...

Done! This is quite a sentence. If you read it out loud, it should be clear that it's not very easy to read. I feel like the whole...

"I use it if I can't think of something" :blob_neutral:

Holy run-on sentence batman

Spelling and grammatical errors in the synopsis means instant pass for me.

It's wrong lmao Web novels and physical novels are different, yes, and you can facilitate easier reading experiences by having shorter...

Hmmmge. It's better yeah. But since I'm in proofread/editor mode, it still doesn't fully sit right with me, and I have no capabilities...

I mean yeah, that makes sense. Having descriptive prose is a standard for writing. I just had a weird feeling about the way Eldoria...

Wait what? Since when are first person pov's always supposed to be making the reader the main character? Have I been reading wrong? Was...