Hello!
So I made a slice of life/romance webnovel and would like some feedback on the first few chapters. You are free(And encouraged) to read more if you somehow enjoy my story. I intended for the story to have some heavy thematic elements on talent, self loathing, purpose, and identity...
This is mine.
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2164749/a-promise-from-me-to-you/
Inspired by A silent voice, Re zero, and slightly Classroom of the Elite. SInce it's not a fantasy but a slice of life, it was more inspired by Re zero's thematic depth and character writing.
As a pretty young writer, that critique would be appreaciated.
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2164749/a-promise-from-me-to-you/
Just a slice of life/romance story about the protagonist in the 2nd best highschool in the US. Focuses on the growth of his and his friend's minsets over time.
Made a romance/slice of life with a self deprecating protagonist in the 2nd best school in the US. Focuses on the mental struggles him and his friends deal with.
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2164749/a-promise-from-me-to-you/