Recent content by ThatRandomWriter

Hello, I am writing this from my phone. Most of this post will be therefore copy-pasted from my personal notes. I am the writer of Ultima NPC (although yes I upload very rarely. I do apologize for that). My question is simply this, what does everyone think of the idea for 'cultivation' that I...

Thank you for the long comment and all the feedback. I cannot comment on everything, but I can assuredly say my writing style, as well as how I handle the system has changed. I would like to believe so anyway Thank you again :)

Thank you for your comments, I like to believe that I've improved as time has gone on. I recognize the mistakes you've pointed out. The choices I made as the story started changed as time went on. I would like to say I know the meaning of the words, as I do. With how I wrote him at the start...

I posted this awhile ago, but didn't receive any comments other than a single reaction. Which I am grateful for. Maybe posting this at a different time will help. I would like some feedback on my story, the first part of which is linked below. Even if you only read a single chapter I still...

I um, am not sure what to put here, other than saying that part 2 is currently being worked on, but going forward I would like to hear criticisms given to the story. So part 1 is here and um, part 2, all three chapters of it are also available for critique...