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TTalon88.1 replied to the thread Offering feedback on the first chapter of your story (No Smut).Always looking to improve, edited several chunks based on a roasters review too. Please and thank you...
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TTalon88.1 replied to the thread I'll read your first chapter and tell you my opinion on it.Always looking for a critique to improve! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1915090/shadows-in-the-sand-warhammer-/ As for inspiration...
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TTalon88.1 replied to the thread Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless.It really wasnt intended for a general audience, I write primarily to sharpen my skills :D As for the atmo, I can agree with trimming...
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I read two chapters, which in this case means I was lovingly volunteered to read what is essentially eight chapters smuggled across the... -
TTalon88.1 replied to the thread Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless.First off, thank you for your time! And I can see the issues, chapter 2's length came about because I had scenes in my head and I was...
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TTalon88.1 replied to the thread Story Time with the Meme Lady - A Feedback Thread (submit your stories!).Always looking for feedback, anything to help me improve! Please and thank you :D...