Recent content by Szaku

4, ever. after that i start to get the feeling that authors don't know how days, time, and events work anymore. i say that, because if you're talking about a harem to begin with there's generally a shared lifestyle, living situation, or some such that would reasonably place all parties in the...

sure, given that it's your baby. also ive never once believed the "you get to do what you want with your body" right applied to those who can't provide for themselves. mixing adult decisions and liberties into children's cereal and cartoons isn't the way. teaching my kids about it to prep...

to OP, no. reason being, even if it is the most wish fulfillmenty type isekai, there are levels that make "some good or some bad" you see people whine about the tropes and cliches a lot, but when done well, just about every story ever made is just a delicate (or blunt) combination of the same...

DAYUM! spoilers! SPOILERS!! im glad i wasn't reading this story yet :s_eek:

i started imagining the political and possibly religious intrigue involved. you know in most kingdoms the royal family is somewhat distant from the nobility. like sure the people loyal to the prince or his family would "want you dead" simple enough but what about the nobles who were plotting...

didnt even read it. i just wholeheartedly agree and support the concept that authors nowadays NEED some type of tutorial on how to finish their stories. now quickly translate this to mandarin and mass send it to every cultivation-y novel writer and see you in that glorious future i am now...

no. honestly, i didn't. ive felt like the OP for a long time. also there's that nagging feeling after a while that ppl are just buttkissing and id like to not take part of it. i get it, i realize its more for the writer than myself but after seeing several "tHiS iS tHe GrEaTeSt StOrY eVeR...

id have changed the word "arching" to "stretching" and added a popping or cracking sound somewhere between the "ahhh"'s and the entire thing would've read fine, but looking at the comments, it seems it was intended to be overtly sensual? maybe the character could instead make some lustful moans...

"Saphiria" does it for me.

divine being, hands down. nothing good has ever come of me getting laid other than this unreasonable, unholy, insatiable desire to get laid again.. it is, by far, the worst addiction i've ever known, and that's counting it took me some 14 years to finally quit cigarettes.. so.. very tired of...

zombies are ridiculously overused, to the point that ive start to glaze over whatever a story or a game or a movie is trying to be whenever they're introduced. oh, i know there are still some interesting variations of them out there - for example, those chinese leaping zombies :blob_no: -...

boss (choking up): "fan~tastic! ya really.. outdid yaself this.. time! what a surprise!!.. we cleaned up all the moles and rats in one go! this musta taken weeks to put togetha?" henchman: "..wha- boss, that was all of ya closest peoples?! y-you just killed 2 of your kids and-" boss...

id think they'd be something like "progression" system and "augmentation" progression is the one with quests "complete xx task gain xx weapon/armor/skillbook" etc augmentation would be like.. "pick up xx attributes/stats/stat points from defeated enemies" progression would be like the mouthy...

"cool kids" he says :rolleyes: apparently i only partially qualify for the "literate" kids.. i only just realized the scrolling banners on the homepage leads you here which is effectively the author's section of the forum. ive been just a-talkin' and replying to you.....weirdoes.. for MONTHS...

granted. but from a subjective point of view "way too much" is kind of what id imagine defines 'super reliable narration' ..also, wasnt action and intrigue the selling point of that story? :unsure: at the very least im entirely sure history and maths was not 'it'. following that train of...