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I understand. Your words are completely reasonable and I will do my best to improve using the advice given by you to me. Thank you for your help. Well, fighting isn't my speciality. I would probably give up writing sooner or later.

I guess you are right. I also felt like you in the beginning. However, it actually isn't entirely unnecessary. The religion, the priest in the first episode follows, is the religion dominating the entire world. I was also trying to show how the religion exploit the suffering of people and give...

I am in confusion to whether quit writing my novel or not. In my opinion, my novel is just bland and lifeless. So, I want some opinions about my novel and which aspects I should focus on to improve myself. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/310797/the-fallen-king/

To be honest, I don't have much hopes on my novel (I also want to completely abandon it). Yet, I still hope you review it so, if I create a new novel in the future, I can reflect on my mistakes. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/310797/the-fallen-king/