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I'm not going to tell you if that is offensive or not because you already answered that; if you had the thought "Is this offensive?"... -
Succubiome replied to the thread Writing How does a moral antagonist (3D) end up as a dark mirror of the protagonist?.Coming back to this, I think it's interesting to think about "Retributive Justice" vs "Rehabilitative Justice" vs "No Justice" in this...
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Succubiome reacted to GlassRose's post in the thread Writing How does a moral antagonist (3D) end up as a dark mirror of the protagonist? with
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I think you're confusing antagonist and villain. Villain means bad guy, antagonist means opposing the protagonist. The protagonist could... -
Succubiome replied to the thread Writing How does a moral antagonist (3D) end up as a dark mirror of the protagonist?.Enemies to lovers with the protagonist! (Really, it depends on what kind of story you're writing.)
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Succubiome reacted to unlaumy's post in the thread How do you describe something to make sure it's not too wordy? with Like.
I checked your story on SH to make sure my assumption isn't wrong. So I don't know if it's your intended writing style or it's the way...
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Succubiome replied to the thread How do you describe something to make sure it's not too wordy?.If you're narrating in the person, I'd mostly describe the orange juice as much as the character in question would care about it if not...