“The froth of dreams felt like it was drowning in the ocean of her embarrassment. She had no idea that the love letter she was writing on the fragile paper of life with the pen of love would be ruined by math equations.
And when the timing of the result announcement came, what could possibly be...
I agree with you both first images are really good. I wanted to use one of them, but when I tried to place it in the chapter where I had in mind, the atmosphere just didn’t fit. The tone there is different, and the image felt out of place, even though I loved it.
I might still use them...
That was beautifully said. Thank you for sharing that.
I’m going to remember that: learn the rules, then figure out which one to break.
Thank you for taking the time to write this. It means a lot.
the story hasn’t gotten any comments yet, I don’t really have readers to poll :censored::cry:
thanks for the advice, both of you! Really helpful.
@YukieSama I agree, sticking with Aster’s story feels like the most natural move. The more I think about it, the more I see the novel I just finished...
Hey everyone,
I’m a new writer,
So I just finished the first part of my dark speculative novel Blood of the First House (incestuous dynasty, genetic engineering, revenge, apocalypse the whole deal). I’m pretty happy with how it came out. But now I’m stuck in that “what now?” phase.
The story...
Hey, thanks a lot for giving the first chapter a shot and for the kind words about the grimdark and psychological horror really means a lot.
Yeah, about the “futanari” tag honestly, that might’ve been a mistake or something It’s not really a thing in the story at all. The focus is on horror...