Recent content by Snehazrul

I did it recently too. Because as I progressed, the fighting was getting too much cartoonish, so I had the change back the power to something else

My super power will be being able to pull all nighters every night and complete syllabus before others.

Nah, she just wants to keep going on.

Sounds fun, don't know if anyone is interested. However, The unfinished Life of Saryntha: Celestial knights Saryntha is a teen girl, finding validation. So she goes to Celestial knights school, where students are taught to slay celestials,expecting to pass all the selection phase. But she...

Maybe I would want to be the celestial, reading mind is fun. But I haven't introduced the character I won't want to be.

Thank you so much for your reply. I didn't think people would be actually interested to read my story, so i overlooked the descriptions, going straight to the point. Actually, The first chapter showed the event that occured in present. Then with chapter 2, it actually went to the past events...

Omg, you all are so cute ?. Thank you so much for taking your time. I thought people wouldn't go through if they were big. Thanks again

Thank you so much, buddy. This really helps. I'll try to improve on them. Tbh, I am managing it with my other businesses.Where did you feel lost exactly? I can help with that. Or reading a few more chapters may give you the context you want.

For me, the more relatable they are, the more I like them. Their struggles feel real, and in a way, they offer me consolation during my own tough moments. That’s why I made my protagonist the way I love—flawed, struggling, and far from perfect. I'd love to hear your thoughts too.

Totally agree

For me, I actually love the characters more ,who go through redemption arc. But sometimes, some characters are more suited as villains

I recently joined this community. I am not sure if you'd like it or not, but I am sure I am writing while being myself. I'll decide on your feedbacks if i should continue or not