Recent content by SkaraVaden

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    Feedback On First Time Romance Smut Book

    Okay, I'm not an expert critic or anything like that, just an avid reader and a fairly amateur writer, but if it helps, here's my opinion: I quite like your writing style. A mix of direct descriptions and occasional introspection that comes across as quite interesting, almost poetic. You don't...
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    Would you review my novel?

    First of all, and as has been said, the first chapter has the start and finish in Spanish. And, as a Spanish speaker, I can also point is a poorly written Spanish. No many gramatical errors, I guess because the text editor corrected them, but in the senses it looks like: a poorly translated text...
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    I'll review first chapters... ?

    Again, I thank you very much for reading me and for your kind words! You don't have an idea how much this means for me, and it really, really made my weekend (and probably the rest of the month, to be honest haha).
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    I'll review first chapters... ?

    No problem at all! Thank you very much!
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    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    Hi! I would like (or maybe not like, but think I need) to hear your opinion about my story. Thank you very much! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1660931/respawned-my-last-chance/
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    Promote your story here!

    Ok, so here I go: Isekai LitRPG Polyamorous and bi FMC (she doesn't want to choose, ok?) Slow-burn (so slow that the two main romantic interests won't appear for like... some chapters more, ig, but she has some minor interests along in the meantime) Also, some existencial crisis, because why...
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    I'll review first chapters... ?

    Thank you! That would be great!!!
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    I'll review first chapters... ?

    Hi! If you still have room, I would love some feedback on my story! Thank you very much, either way! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1660931/respawned-my-last-chance/
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    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    Hi! I would love some feedback on my story, if you feel like it :D I want honesty, because I fear I could have a bias about the story haha https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1660931/respawned-my-last-chance/
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    The Lift is Rising. You Have 30 Seconds. Sell Me Your Story.

    You really got me there! We would need a streaming service, I don't think theatres are ready for throuples :sneaky:
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    The Lift is Rising. You Have 30 Seconds. Sell Me Your Story.

    A woman gets isekai'ed on her favorite MMO, as part of a group of adventurers. Suddenly, the danger is real, but so are the emotions, the marvel and the world she loved. And, above it all, the character she loved are there. Closer to her than she ever dared to dream. And they have secrets that...
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    Chosen One or The Power Runs in the Family?

    What do you prefer, a character that obtains their power/responsibility/whatever because is the Chosen One, or because their lineage (knowing or not who their family is)? I'm talking about a character that lives normally and then is just involved in the tipical shit of every fantasy story, and...
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