Recent content by rustgoblin32

hey thanks man! this is my first story so I was kind of expecting something along the lines of "this is shit". but I still appreciate the honest feedback.

hey! I could really use feedback on my alternate history story im writing. its only 3 chapters right now so it should be a relatively quick read. technical feedback on things like grammar, spelling, etc is ok, im thankful for any type of feedback whatsoever so in the end its your choice. but i...

I got thick skin and I actually want to improve my skills so be as harsh as you want. if its not too much trouble though i would appreciate more constructive criticism so I know what I should work on. I don't care where you post the feedback, whatever's most convenient for you...