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Hmm... I might be lacking context, dude. I might understand the protagonist's feelings a little bit. But I don't feel the betrayal...

Betrayal and Regret to be precise.

Ah yes, that was intended actually. May I know, is it hard to visualize the action scene or the emotions too? Thank you so much for...

first off, for someone who "speaks" in these forums with an accent... your 'accent' sure disappears quick when you write. very good...

Hmm...I feel like the pacing is slightly off. I feel like the first scene is too slow and the second is too fast. I'm having trouble...

Hi, I need your opinion about this emotional scene I made. Can you capture the emotion? Or is it too flat? Or maybe it's too fast? The...

you need to wait, it's under review friend.

Oh, it was the same guy who DM me few days ago. I didn't accept it thou, since I was too lazy set up that kind of stuff :sweat_smile...

I think it's pretty clear and straight forward. The superheroes are immune to that Typopvirus that originate from Ox Empire. Sadly the...

Thank you for the advice. I'm still trying to make the story's point right now. To be honest, I was inspired by your work at MENTOR...

I'll read the first chapter of your story. I'm a better reader than a writer, so my points will be focused on how it made me feel than a...

If you want, you can DM me, i'll try give you my honest opinion regarding it.

Yes, it's a straight relationship.

Tbh, i don't really get it. What kind of tension you want to seek from those narrative? Excitement? Or Dreadful feeling?

Well, what i mean wasn't that kind of tense scene, more like romantic tension between the characters :sweat_smile: Would you mind...