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  • Rolanov
    Rolanov replied to the thread Critique me..
    Depend on your intention or context, but i felt like losing the plot at chapter 2.
  • Rolanov
    Rolanov replied to the thread Critique me..
    I think this is my own personal taste, but i feel like the story plot breaking at chapter 2. Chapter 1 about arena, using short...
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