Recent content by Robert.Hillmyre

thanks that was actually constructive. i thought i did give them individual personalites, but i guess not. and yes my formatting and editing are an issue. im working on it. i just wanted to get the whole story out. see which part sticks. one is clearly better than the rest. and I'll just pay an...

Valid point. It more fantasy with some smut in it than smut with story. Their are chapters were I go full smut. Not just every chapter. Also for context. The whole chapter is an homage to the movie 9 and half weeks. Old movie. They are having sex to charge up crystals to open a portal. Also...

Ok thanks. You are entitled to your opinions. I replaced the 1st law of theormodynamics with sex. And Clarke's 3rd law also with sex. And Homer's beer the cause of and solution to all of life problems. Also sex. And finally uncle Ben's with great power.... also sex. I guess I speak like an...

Care to elaborate? Is it my formatting? Is it the subject matter? Is it too dense and Philosophical?

Thanks that makes me feel better.

2 out of 4 books they really didn't like. I didn't think it'd be so polarizing. 5 star or 1 star. Are they really that bad? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2136346/bound/ https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2176581/a-covenant-of-bodies/...

There is sometimes a melancholic feeling that it's over. So I usually just continue the story in another book. Lol.

Flowers: Foxgloves Deadly Nightshade Carnivorous / Exotic: Pitcher Plants – Like Venus flytraps Sundews Birds: Black swans Crows / Ravens Barn Owls

2 out of 4 books they really didn't like. I didn't think it'd be so polarizing. 5 star or 1 star. Are they really that bad? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2136346/bound/ https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2176581/a-covenant-of-bodies/...

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At face value your religion sounds like the Borg mixed with radical Islam. Might not be what you we going for, but just saying ppl might be offended. Not me. But some ppl. You can also just disregard this completely lol. Have a good day!!

The only good thing that came from university papers that helped with my writing, was making and using outlines.

Oh thats good. I'm actually tired of that kind of stuff being so prevalent.

Like what? asking for a friend lol.

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