Recent content by RayVer

Well, cough cough. If your work isn't a translation, it will show back up once you go through the proper means of DMing the admins. This isn't my technical prowess speaking now, but my future-telling one. Hmm... it's telling me that you should send proof to the admins. If all is as you say and...

My first ban wave guys. Super duper excited! GONE BE THE TRANSLATIONS!!!

Let's go!

When I'm writing my novel I think. I am not writing.

My first piece of writing was a Naruto fanfic centered around an OC who replaced Zabuza; I just thought the Seven Ninja Swordsmen were cool and underdeveloped back then and went along with my imagination. Thankfully, it has been scrubbed from the internet, I don't know what I'd do if I came...

Pondering

Are they not showing up?

Hello everyone, Rayver here. I've just released a new novel (lightning mage), and it's been a while since I've written a story so I'll be starting this story feedback post. As you can tell by the name, the idea is sort of out there! The way feedback on this thread will work is in the form of a...

That makes sense, when writing characters with specific ideologies you have to make sure the character is consistent and always prjecting their viewpoint. I assume it takes deep research into the actual ideology that the character themselves portray, like you have to understand the specific...

For all those who are authors when writing a story you realise that it's necessary to write many different type of character archetypes. Not to say that the creation of a character is limited and set to a single archetype, there can be fluidity but most would agree that if you were to generalise...

I operate on purely vibes and coffee. General idea of where the novel is planned out, but how I get there is flexible and forever changing, beware that this doesn't work for everyone though.

I haven't wrote in a while but I'd appreciate if you'd check out a story I've decided to continue. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/539775/my-teacher-is-an-sss-legend/

So I gave the first 3 chapters a read and here's my verdict. Grammar And Prose ----------------- - Overall the grammar and prose was to a good standard. I had no immediate grammatical troubles reading your work which is commendable as some stories well, you know how it is. Characters...

I'll keep it short and snappy. I like to read quite a bit and I like a good story. Place any of your stories below and I'll honestly provide feedback on your first 3 chapters and what I think about them. Little edit here, no harems or BL

I typically aim from anywhere from 500-1500 words, I prefer to do things in a single sitting and thus keeping within this range makes it easier,