Recent content by PrimarineRose

Thanks a lot for replying I think you are right that I do over-describe. The suggestion for feeding them about the appearance as the narrative goes and incorporating the features in the actions of the character is great! I totally overlooked the fact that I could have done that. About the...

I recently started writing and am quite unsure about my writing style The Time Manipulator | Scribble Hub There was a comment saying that the story, for now, is good. That doesn't give me the specifics of what exactly was good and what I need to work on. As of now, there are three chapters. I...