Recent content by Peagreene

Sertraline.

Personally speaking, it sounds uninteresting. There's no tension or reason to read the story if it's just about some guy effortlessly beating people up over and over again.

It's not my kind of thing. Super strength and overpowered protagonists aren't interesting to me. Do you want like some things to think about in terms of plot, or story structure, or character arcs? As in, what things you could include to make your story compelling or give your characters depth?

Is this what you want feedback on?

what to do when a young autistic person earnestly tells you, a much older and world-wearier autistic person, that just because their brain works a different way it doesn't mean they're lazy or make them less than other people

Hell yeah, trans icon. Dumbass assassins? Four of them and not one thinks to just run the prince through right there and then? If assassination is the goal, why bother tying him up? Just cut his throat there and then. I'm pretty sure if you suffer head trauma so severe you lose consciousness...

Who's saying this? A lot going on here. Why are the names bolded? What's an ever-changing sky? What are the green flames? Where are they - first off they're running through the palace and then all of a sudden they're in the skies. This is a very surface-level way of setting the scene. Comma...

Not my vibe at all, sorry.

Also I guess I'm not looking for King in terms of quality (though obvs that would be fantastic) but more in terms of content. The way he blends supernatural with the mundane is 100% my jam.

What can I say, I know what I like.

who cares? Pasolini made Salo.